User blog comment:Demon Bob/Not Fair/@comment-26245895-20151127054245

Jesus Christ, man; I should never read this before going to bed. This is just down right depressing in every possible way I could read it.

And honestly, it's written quite well, especially since you never specifically called Death by his name until the end, even though readers may well indeed know who it was (especially as the hints grew more obvious through the story).

It was good, man; depressing and sad, but good. I honestly suggest publishing this on FanFiction.Net or a similar site and let others read it; I think there are some tragedy readers that would like to read this.